Problem:
The existing message is cold and technical.
Solution:
Write a new time-out warning that aligns with brand style, voice, and tone.
My contribution:
This interstitial exists to let users know that the bank is protecting their data, it just does a horrible job of telling them that.
Instead of only telling the user what’s happening, the new message highlights why it matters and provides a clear user benefit. I removed the formal language and technical jargon and shifted to a clear, conversational, style-guide-approved tone.
I also suggested swapping the primary and secondary actions. From a user perspective, there’s no need for a distinct action to log out, as that will happen anyway if they do nothing.
Note: <0:59> = Dynamic countdown
